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A Kind of Apocalypse

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'Twas brillig, no, 'twas later than brillig
when the lights of the car brushed
the rusted wire of the gate.
And as I opened the door of the
car, a voice as gravelly as the
pebbles beneath the tyres swung
at me from out of the darkness.
Wary, wary, quite contrarily, I listened.
My neighbour, a man my friend,
guided me to a home not my own,
to a family not my own,
filled me up with food as he
told me that three I held most dear
had been in a car accident.
I felt the flesh of my face pale
and the bones of fingers tremble.
I felt the cold, sympathetic stare
as he gauged my reaction,
and I felt my previous world
end, not with a bang, but with
a whimpering shudder.
This was my first attempt at performance poetry (for an exercise in class; we had five-ten minutes or so). If I feel up to it, I might upload a recording of me reading it (if I figure out how to upload it) just for kicks.

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AnnMarieBone's avatar
I can't believe you wrote such a powerful piece of poetry in such a short time!  I feel that the surreal shock that the subject is feeling is portrayed really well, with the use of childhood poetry. (I always understood that Humpty Dumpty said that brillig was 4 O'Clock in the afternoon, when people began broiling things.)